Ralts's DNTM Season 2 Photoshoot 03 critiques

Hello models, Another week, another critiques. Let me remind y'all that none of this is meant with ill intent, it's just fun and games. That being sadi, let's go ahead and critique some of these "models". https://www.kovaze.com/group_thread/80 Maris - The photo meets the brief, kind of... There was asked for it to be vibrant and you're literally the same color as the benches, which are already a deaf tone. The bob is eating but the rest idk it feels kinda lazy, not very interesting to look at. Jane - The bald head in this type of photoshoot REALLY helps you out, you look stunning, chill, relaxed. It's giving the cool girl who hangs out with 1-2 nerds and everybody wants to be their friend but she's the one that doesn't. Love it. Cristi - Your hair is probably the hardest to work out of everyone's, the purple being so bright makes it difficult and the bright green/yellow doesn't go very well with it. The sunglasses needed to be a bit lower so we can actually see your eyes or have them on and just give a idgaf vibe. It's almost there. lluckygc - The pose is a bit too relaxed and chill and with the face not giving any emotion it's just not fully there. Even though the colors are "vibrant" colors it's still a very dull purple and orange so nothing really stands out. Brat - I think I might hate this :S The jacket being open doesn't do you ANY favours. It was suppose to be oversized but it you makes your body go away completly. Then we have to add that there is no tracksuit on the lower part, they're some jeans :S The pose being on all fours is kinda not it either and there's no vibrant colors :S As the girl who made a photoshoot overdosed I love the risk and you've been killing it but this week you might be having some trouble, sorry. Medusaluh - I looove the high heel with the tracksuit, it gives high fahsion buuut that's about it. Once again no neck and the same pose and facial expression as last week is giving lazy. I understand that you're trying to give high fashion but there's no vibrancy in this photo, the pink is so dull, your face is almost completly gone and the Dimilux seems like a cheap sticker put on the pants. Bubba - IDK if I said this to you cause some of you look kinda similar but while I do enjoy the picture and angle being different really complementing the photo style, I need it to be closer cause I kinda lose your face from so far away, I'm looking at too much running track or whatever that is. It's a good photo but it needs a tiny bit of refinement, but better than last week. Sprite - MOTHER! Girl, the judges are probably going to read you to filth and if I was a judge I'd probably have to too but since I'm not you AAAAte this UP. Thank you for bringing back your green, nobody does green like you and green is literally the color I hate the most. The pose is VERY strong, the look in your eyes is so powerful, the bleachers, the outfit, it's literally my fave by far. The judges will probably knock you down cause where is the oversized? I kinda see what you were trying to give oversize in the boots but idk it's a little bit of a reach and also no tracksuit but honestly idgaf you ate this hahahaha MissKant - I've really been enjoying your photos so far but this week... :S A lot fo you went for the idgaf not looking at the camera and while it kinda fits the theme, it still needs to read as strong and powerful, not some highschool girl taking photos at PE. All of your picture is matte so the vibrant is nowhere, the black and the green makes everything so dark. I do appreciate the pose at least. GatoPisado - This is what I meant for Cristi. If you're gonna have sunglasses on, you either have them on or off to the point where we can see your eyes in the camera. Your hair really favours this type of photoshoot cause the orange hair with the vibrant pink is kinda giving 80s but where is the oversize girl? It's titties and body. The left leg needs to be not so bent so it doesn't give lazy as well since you're giving fierce. KaliMinaj - Im pretty sure I own those shoes lol Another dark blue tracksuit but at least the lighting here helps it be vibrant but it's still kinda boring. I think your makeover made you very generic and you just look like and IG influencer that most of the people wouldn't know their name. While I know it's not your fault, you might have to work on how to make your photos interesting cause it's just kind of MEH... AntoG - You're so lucky you're still here after last weeks photoshoot.I love the hood on and the pose, this is what I meant for Gato's picture, the leg needs to be not bent. But then you look at the rest of the photo and it's a bit bland, while the gold on the lettering looks good, if Dimitra is asking for vibrant and bold, black and navy blue for the bleachers is not giving bold nor vibrant. akaliuchis - At this point I feel like Im just repeating myself cause I have the same issue as with Anto's picture, it's nightime and then neither your tracksuit or background helps the photo be bold or vibrant. Also why is your seat almost broken? She's not fat lol Full body was asked for and we can't see half your leg but oh well... Your hair is the most vibrant thing in the picture and it wasn't even your choice. It's just another boring photo sorry. manyomash - I know this girl, it's the older cool girl at school. Looove the pose and face how relaxed it is but not losing strenght in it. But the rest is a miss for me. Another boring navy blue tracksuit with no vibrant or bold choice made to it. This being said I will say this week is a bit messy for me, if you're not gonna do the prompt completly at least have fun and make something crazy and unique like Sprite, but girls... You don't follow the prompt and then you make the photo boring? Wake up, we're on photoshoot 3 and we need to start seeing some models not just pretty girls. Photoshoot3 ranking: 1. Sprite (idgaf you ate that) 2. Jane 3. GatoPisado 4. Bubba 5. Ilucky 6. AntoG 7. Cristi 8. KaliMinaj 9. Manyomash 10. Medusaluh 11. MissKant 12. Maris 13. akaliuchis 14. Brat #DNTM2 Dimitra