Ralts's critiques DNTM3 #02

Hello models, First of all I want to thank all the comments left on my last critiques, I like that everyone is seeing all the opinions and taking them into account as much as possible and how positive everyone reacted. Second of all, I'm really excited about this photoshoot, it seems like a fun photoshoot to do and watch. While I know the fruit had to be present in the photo, I'll be evaluating how much of the fruit I get of the fruits were removed. RobbieRiot - Honestly, I don't even know what this fruit is even seeing it. The pose is very simple, the face has very little to none expression. While the dress is cool, with the effect the photo has, it's too matchy and blends in with the fruits too much, nothing pops extremely. The lighting is the only good thing of the photo, it hits her skin beautifully. Don't get too comfy. dailyicon - I don't enjoy at all how the effect and lighting of this photo looks. It looks very messy, too blended in as well, making very difficult to see clearly any details. I do appreciate the leg position, it creates a very clean line, but that's about all clean the photo has. I see that the week1 faves are trying to rely on week1 scores, don't get too comfy. honey - I can tell the fruit you're going for right away even even if the watermelons weren't there, that's what I like the most about the picture. The pose vibe is simple but effective. While the jumpsuit is cute, it's missing high fashion. Everything in general is leaning more towards Instagram model than super model. Love the details on the background being wet as the watermelon. bosslady - Damn girl. You really out your out forward this week. The pose is soooo powerful, it radiates such high power and command. I like the use of lemons in the suit, it's actually a "pattern" I really like. This is how you rock a suit, keep and eye men. The face is exquisite. The necklace dropping in the middle of the tits is so fierce, but it's really close of taking your high fashion element out, careful with too much sex when unnecessary. I really enjoy the ambiance of the photo in general as well. Poof - Your face looks GOOOORGE, the lighting is hitting you right, and also in the body, but careful cause they are two different skin tones. If you take off the cherries I'm not sure I would actually give cherry, same happened with Daily, I think cherries are so basic that they give nothing really. Nothing too interesting to comment on, your face might save you this week. Thiii - Damn girl, you surely were hungry this week cause you ate this up hard. The texture of the dress being the texture of a peach is soooo smart, if you would take the peaches out of the picture and it would be so recognizable. You picked a great fruit for your hair, it blends so we'll with it, playing to your favour. The flower details are great. No notes. Keep this energy. muribolt - I'm just going to give up on trying to see your full face, I guess it's never happening. My least favorite grape picture.To feed yourself is a weird choice, it doesn't really go e luxurious as the grapes usually are, they usually are fed to you. The dress is cute but the leg position make you look 5ft tall, it's giving very short. Seong - Dad ❤️ This is such a risky take and personally I really enjoy it, peaches give soft and delicate and you really hit the nail with the vibe of the photo. Too bad the other peach one is very good cause if you would have done something a tiny bit more unique and captivated this vibe it would be a home run but I fear she did eat you up a little. Also, while I love your originality here, I'm going to need for you to give more supermodel, it's the main concept of the reality. Tisha - The best cherry photo for sure. Cherries here are usually this dark and they go very well with your skeleton aesthetic, we call them "picotas". I love how you made your face so shiny and switched it up from what we've seen before, also matching the vibe of the dress. The arms proportion are much better this week, while they still look a tiny bit not as equal, but also we can't tell, just keep a close eye on it. Would have loved for the backdrop to have something more, it's very simple while being effective, for Top17 is going to cut it but keep in mind on the future, I believe you have what it takes. Goomybear - I saw some of your competitors were hating a bit on the picture but I find this veeeery appealing to the eye. This is the best grape photo BY FAR. When I think of grape, I think of wine, I think of the Italian Tuscany and you delivered so fucking well. The outfit eats, the leg open with the your tattoos almost look like lace to me, looove, it gives elevated, it gives sexy without being obscene and it gives high fashion, which a lot of people are missing. The face is 10/10, he looks more masc than usual and while I won't fem shame, it hits hard, some of you should take notes on serving some face here. For me it's a contender for top photo but apparently people aren't enjoying it, but I think they aren't looking at it and going further with it. Torimarie - Is that pomegranate? The outfit looks a bit customy and not high fashion. The smashing of the fruit while crying the fruit liquid as well is very editorial. Why your other hand has no fingers makes it weird and very distracting, take away from the arm pose. Very safe in general. Sexytex - Hmm I'm not quite sure how I feel about this photo, I appreciate the original fruit idea and how if you take the dragonfruits out, the dress still reads as that but maybe a bit too customy as well. If the arms were straight, it would give a very strong line, refining the softness you're trying to give that the dragonfruits doesn't really represent. Both legs being bent while on your toes also doesn't do you any favors. Tayvie - Mid grape photo, not the most original, at least you went for green grapes, but the lines created are horrible. Both legs bent creating no clear lines and you add those shoes that makes the lines even less appealing. Body looks correct and while he his looking at the camera the face isn't telling me anything interesting, I do appreciate the eye makeup, subtle but effective. Lewis - Uuuuh I see you're really trying, this is your best photo so far for sure, as for Tisha's I like when cherries are more on the dark red side than. The splashing reminds me of the milk photoshoot from last season. Actions and face are resembling the same energy which I do like. It's ok the stronger side, but a little too predictable with the cherry choice. Camell22 - I love the softness that are you presenting to us, it's very on brand for your soft boy energy and very well executed. The lines created are very good but I do fear that the other 2 peach ones are better than yours. You also went for a velvet texture as Thiii but a little less well executed. Sam - At least you're original, I will give you that and once again while I appreciate it for swinging big, once again the execution is not there. The pose is messy, no clear lines. Your face is turned away losing all impact it could possible have. I have no idea what fruit this is but it seems like a tough and sweet fruit but it seems you're not emulating any of it. Once again I hope that you keep trying and swinging hard cause I know that it will hit, hopefully not before you leave. Hare - I hate ending in a double bad note. I told muribolt that her's was the worst grape but I fear you saved her on that. You picked an over picked fruit and decided to not even give us anything original. The pose is not flattering. The outfit is cool at least. No background to add to the photo makes it even more boring. I really enjoyed the theme, but I fear that 4 cherries, 4 grapes and 3 peaches is too on the nose. Guys please take more than 5 minutes to think of the theme and just stick to it, there's a ton of fruits that haven't been used and that just helps you not be compared between each other. Ranking #02 1. Thiii 2. Goomybear 3. Bosslady 4. Seong 5. Tisha 6. Lewis 7. Camell22 8. Poof 9. ToriMarie 10. Honey 11. SexyTex 12. DailyIcon 13. RobbieRiot 14. Tayvie 15. Muribolt 16. Hare 17. Sam #DNTM3 Dimitra