DNTM Cycle 3 Ep 4 RAPIDFIRE critiques

Just did write ups and accidentally closed the tab, so now it will be one sentence each LOL :) I'm lowkey fuming, but the show must go on. #DNTM3 dimitra Let's see who brought their A game tonight. robbieriot Critique: Honey you already know I don't like this it's so low energy and awkward. She reminds me of a sloth, just so vacant in the face and the body is not engaged properly. I appreciate the risky pose and love the placement of the ball, but it's not clicking for me as usual. 6.9/10 muribolt Critique: I'm obsessed with the makeover and I'm obsessed with this shot. The water squirting in the face adds a really cool effect and I love that the mug stayed strong through it. The water does look a little fake, but the pose/face are strong regardless. 9.5/10 goomybear Critique: I go back and forth with this shot. It does kinda look depressing, dull, and defeating like he just lost the championship game and is subjecting himself to a humiliation ritual to make up for letting the team down. However, the jacket and the ball placement are really fun. I appreciate that there's a high fashion element and do think the face turning adds a lot of intensity. Body language turned away from the camera is dangerous, but the styling being focused on the jacket makes up for it. This is solid overall. 7.5/10 sam Critique: this just....blows a lot of the girls out of the water ngl. The ball spinning was such a genius idea and a staple when it comes to basketball. Adds a dynamic quality to the shot, and this man looks STUNNING. The camera being tilted up at him adds a lot of dominance and the quality of this shot is the best of the bunch. The DNTM on the jersey was so creative. Of course I'm not the biggest fan of a static pose. I do think to be at the top of the pack you need to give something extra with body positioning MOST OF THE TIME. But he looks amazing and I think this is very well thought out. 9.6/10 dailyicon Critique: this is a lot of fun, I love your approach of a basketball court from hell. The fiery aesthetic fits this man's persona and his face is radiating with intimidation. Body positioning is interesting, love love love love the hand digging into the rim of the hoop. It makes it look less AI slobbish. my only problem really is I do wish the ball was spinning. It looks a little strange just sitting there on the pointer finger. overall, great job! 8.8/10 camell22 Critique: My crush.....but there's a major problem with this shot. It is the placement of the water/water bottle hitting his face. The arm should have been lifted higher and water drizzling down strategically, rather than it being so close to his face that it's smothering his eyes and disconnecting us from any emotion in his face. He kinda looks like he got maced, and it's a shame because the legs are looking so yummy. It's just completely lost in the face, which throws off the whole shot. 7/10 bosslady Critique: The all red is really unflattering and is hurting my eyes. You wouldn't be able to tell the shot was based off basketball if the ball wasn't sitting there in the picture. I love how long she looks and that the face is sharp like Naomi Campbell. Modeling-wise, you can tell she thought about posing/emoting. It's just the styling that's really bad here with the background and the outfit. 7.2/10 tayvie Critique: FINALLY YOU DID YOUR BIG ONE. This is really fucking good and could easily be in a magazine. I could see any major NBA player doing exactly this after winning the championship game. The lightning hitting at just the perfect time, FINALLY THE FACE IS GIVING MODEL AND HAS THAT STRENGTH IT NEEDS. Only problem, a little more intensity in the eyes would've brought this all together. But it's still fabulous. 9/10 lewis Critique: I'm just confused. His body language is really stiff, the styling of the background does not match the outfit at all. Is it supposed to be empowering or is he checking himself out in the hoop to make sure the pimple from a few days ago is healing ok? I get it was meant to kinda be allusive, perhaps I'm being too hard on it? I do like how the net hair flows so long like his hair. I just don't get what's really happening. 6/10 torimarie Critique: hands down the best shot of the night like it's not even close. The proportions and angles are so gorgeous, I love everything is a straight line minus the one leg that adds the perfect amount of curvature. The hues of the background make her skin glow, the hair is flowing just right. You can tell she loves her makeover. It just looks so effortless for her, yet you can tell behind the scenes how much body strength it took to create a photo like this. This is your shining moment, miss Marie!! 10/10 tisha Critique: love the movement so much here, you can tell the photographer was counting you in and making sure you hit those steps at the right moment. The lunge forward just creates such an interesting shape, I love the styling, and I'm obsessed with her makeover. The hand backwards on the rim is the finishing touch I needed to secure this at top of the pack. It's just so good I can't. 9.6/10 honey Critique: We lost one leg, and we almost lost one leg as well. The other foot looks really distorted and unflattering. We can't really see details in her eyes, but I do enjoy the face most of everything. I do think this is messy and lacks a full-formed vision. It's not your best work. 6.5/10 poof Critique: Interesting shape with the body and love how you made the most of a really shitty makeover. It looks like he has amazing control over his body, the spread eagle effect just completely stretches him out in all the right ways. It's a clean shot, but I'm thinking dirty thoughts too. Great job! 8.7/10 thiii Critique: Honey.....you know I'm a big fan of you...but this is not it. I will always love a touch of country pride, but you just did not push it far enough at all. I mean...she looks sad. Like the sun is setting on her WNBA career. I wish there were other elements on Brazil incorporated in the background or in the hoop styling. She just looks so out of place. I think in terms of sports too, the outfit itself just does not scream basketball. I'm getting more of a tennis vibe from her. Who is this girl, where is she going, what is she trying to portray? I just don't know. You may be in trouble my good sis. 6.2/10 seong Critique: This is right in the middle of the pack for me. The play with the angle is my favorite part, It looks like he's swinging right into the camera or as if the net is moving with him. It's very allusive and also disguises my short kings height. Again you manage to take an approach that not many people thought of and your ability to think outside the box makes you stand out in a good way. I'm just wondering if this is editorial or advertorial? Cuz I can easily see this being an ad for nike. I don't take that as a bad thing, but I wonder what the judges will think. Good job! 8/10 Callout: 1. Torimarie 2. Tisha 3. Sam 4. Muribolt 5. Tayvie 6. DailyIcon 7. Poof 8. Seong 9. Goomybear 10. Bosslady 11. Camell22 12. RobbieRiot (girl so lucky) 13. Honey 14. Thiii 15. Lewis