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DNTM Cycle 3 Episode 3 Critiques

Mochalatte 5 hours ago43 views

This week the girls had to tackle dominatrix realness. Some of the girls had me hollering at the moon.....others bark didn't match their bite. Another fabulous theme by dimitra ! Let's get into it. #dntm3 RobbieRiot Critique: If you think about it, the pointing makes no sense. LOOOOOL. The dogs are on leashes, they aren't going anywhere sis! I'm gonna be so honest, I'm just not convinced. I just do not see a model when I look at her, I see a robot. Another week where she can't break out of the brick face and emote effectively. She just has no energy on the set ever and the photos are always missing a wow factor. You cannot keep relying on pretty over and over again. I do think the makeover has potential to give her a little more spunk, which is what she desperately needs. Otherwise, I do love the long legs and besides the pointing, the body positioning is the most beautiful part. I'm just wondering if you will ever produce a shot where the body is interesting and the face is interesting. It seems like it's always either one or the other. 6.5/10 Muribolt Critique: Hm....it's ok. I'm not as blown away as I was with your first two shoots, but I will say this is a nice change of direction for her. Her first few shots have been really glamorous, so I like seeing her as a badass this time. I think the problem here lies with both her face and her body in some sense. With the face, and I say this time and time again, there's a very specific instance where eyes closed works well and this is not one of them. She looks like she's falling asleep and considering the dogs are VICIOUS and READY TO POUNCE, I'd expect a lot more energy exuding from her as well. The body language isn't wildly creative either, she's just standing there. The quality of your image itself is top notch, but I do wish there was something to give it that extra UMPH. 7/10 goomybear Critique: Goomy, I must say this was a hit and I feel like you took direction well. The interaction with the dogs is spot on, he looks very concentrated and simultaneously stunning. The motion with the dogs makes this shot so dynamic, it really looks like he's about to lunge forward with them to attack an enemy. Posing is one of the strongest of the group, you created a unique shape and I love the leg positioning especially. I think what you need to continue to work on is STYLING and picture quality because your shots are always really far away and the outfit choices can be rather questionable....I mean especially here I just think the jacket/cover up feels very out of place and is also just flat out unflattering. Otherwise, this is a huge step up for you mister! 9/10 sam Critique: SAM IS A FORCE TO BE WRECKONED WITH. This is an awesome picture, potentially my favorite of the bunch. It almost gives "raised by dogs" energy the way he's crouching down with them as if to say "I'm one of them and they are on my level". It also radiates really protective, masculine energy which I think was a really creative direction to take this in. The dogs look like they can fuck a bitch up, but under the control of Sam, they appear really tamed down and even a little adorable. The face is gorgeous, and I love how the hand/leg placement bring some motion to the shot. It looks like he told the dogs "hold on, stay calm, dangers near by" and is staying still to try to assess the situation, but is ready to spring into action at any second. As for the other arm and leg....welll.....they kinda get lost, but it's forgivable because this is otherwise really stellar! 9.5/10 dailyicon Critique: I feel like I'm a bit blinded, because this man could win most gorgeous man in the world. The natural beauty is mesmerizing. But we must stay focused and discuss the modeling aspects. He reminds me a superhero, really strong stance and even a bit of a stuffed up chest. I do get dominance and control from this shot, the face is really intimidating and radiates confidence. The main problem here is the body positioning is just very static and go girl give us nothing. Similar to Muribolt. When all models are working under really similar circumstances, you have to find a way to stand out and separate yourself from the pack. This shot is killer, but it doesn't have that WOW factor that puts it at the top of the pack. 8.7/10 camell22 Critique: I'm going back and forth on this one, and it's especially tough because I think he's so pretty and feminine, that to put something off like this was really out of his comfort zone. First no-no that catches my eye in the cape with the collar...hate the way it's moving, hate that it takes the shot in a vampire-ish direction, and it just looks a little cheesy. Otherwise, this is a good shot. ESPECIALLY the face. I actually love the dead-on evil stare at the camera, it feels like he's staring into my soul and has revenge on his mind. Body positioning im iffy about...the legs being a bit elevated looks awkward and I wish he would have committed to either standing up or crouching down. It's making the body look really crunchy and almost non-existent. I think otherwise there are elements of this shot that are interesting, and overall you did a nice job. 8.3/10 bosslady Critique: Wait what....? I'm just so confused cuz this is so different from everyone else's LOL. I'm trying to let it sink in after seeing 6 of the same photos. Um....I think I like it! I'm not completely sold on it, but I do think this radiates power and control in a roundabout way. The body movement and hand placement is stellar, I love that these dogs also look like they're cooperating and that it looks effortless for her to have them be so calm. It almost gives family portrait with dead on looks at the camera, very intense and very high fashion. This is actually the only shot so far I get a really really really high fashion vibe from. The more I stare at it, the more I am appreciating it. Great job BossyLady! 8.5/10 Tayvie Critique: I think the most frustrating part with your model is, he just doesn't really have the model look to him and I struggle to figure out how he can translate prettier on camera. I do appreciate the intensity in his eyes and that there is motion in the picture. If the dogs are ready to pounce, the human attached to them should be walking, running, getting pulled with them OR be trying to hold them back. Body positioning otherwise is very straightforward and generic. The eyes are the best part of this truly and carry the whole shot. 7.1/10 lewis Critique: It's not fully realized and I think what would have been really cool is adding a fashionable touch to the dogs as well if you were going to go in a runway-walk direction. He looks like a boss as usual and this is one of the best FASHION shots of the bunch, but I think you were so worried about looking gorgeous, that you forgot about the dogs and did nothing to enhance their presence/interact with them. The dogs and owners energy is not really matching each other and it's throwing the motion off and the overall aesthetic. It's an OK shot overall. 7/10 hare Critique: It's ok. Face looks really strained and puffy, body language is nothing special. I'm uninspired by the shot as a whole. Definitely comes across in control, but is just feels a bit generic and oversimplified. We have to be able to create unique shapes with our body and find ways to ELEVATE. His look right now is nothing special, so the modeling needs to be top notch to help him stand out. Right now...there's not just enough to keep your attention. 6.2/10 At this point…..MODELS…I ran out of steam *hugs* the fast day changes are just too much pressure. The reviews will start getting shorter. torimarie Critique: Something about this is really off, but I can’t put my figure on it exactly…not the biggest fan of the hue of the skin and I think the dogs looking in a different direction as the model feels like the disconnect. Otherwise, the pose is really interesting and I love how the leg looks longer than it actually is. Definitely looks in control, and the facial expression is fierce AF. This is pretty solid overall despite me starting with the rudest part LOL. 8.1/10 Tisha Critique: LOL UM…..this is her worst performance yet I fear < / 3 Face looks dead I mean….I know she IS, but we have to find a way to put some energy into it. One of the dogs barking and the other one calm af is kinda distracting and it’s almost like they are the stars and you are the prop. Are you controlling them or are they controlling you? I love the legs of course, but otherwise the stance is quite stiff. We can do better than this Tisha. 6.7/10 honey Critique: Gorgeous, I love this sm. Everything works. I love the asymmetry and I love that she doesn’t give a fuck about the dogs, she just wants to serve mug and use the chains to let out some sexual frustration. It is so beyond sexy. I guess my harsh side wants to say I wish she DID interact with the dogs more and looked like she was controlling them, but I do thing everything still works here regardless. 9/10 poof Critique: it’s fine….he looks hot. That’s about it. I mean what is there to really say about this, come on? There’s not much interesting going on at all. He has a very static stance, the dogs are just kinda sitting there. You played it safe and so safe you will be. I don’t necessarily think this warrants going home for you just yet, cuz we’ve seen a lot of potential from you the first two weeks. But we gotta not just do the bare minimum to get by. 6.6/10 thiii Critique: I’m torn on this one. I love how you’re playing with shapes here, I think the leg kinda mimics the chain and creates some really interesting proportions. The face looks really strong, and I love how her other hand is resting on the dogs forehead. It’s playful and cute. I guess my only problem is I wish the chain wasn’t being pulled at the tippity top, it doesn’t really look right. I mean that dog is VICIOUS but very close to her still, you’d only really ever grab the end of the chain if you were desperately trying to hold onto him. But the fun thing about modeling is maybe rules like that don’t need to matter! So…good job overall! 8.5/10 seong Critique: Oh come on Seong…..please get off these girls necks. This is AGAIN BY FAR the best picture of the bunch. You are so creative and seeing your interpretations feels like visiting another planet. The look into the dogs eyes as if to say “I’m not scared of you and don’t try to intimidate me…you will obey me” and the other dog looking like “just do as he says bro…..you don’t want his smoke”. Again COMPLETE 180 to everything we’ve seen from you in the past. Week 1 was sexy chill badass vibes, week 2 was really vulnerable and cutesy, this is just so striking and masculine. Just loving everything you’ve been doing so far. 10/10 Callout Order: 1. Seong 2. Sam 3. Honey 4. 
Goomybear 5. Dailyicon 6. Thiii 7. BossLady 8. Camell22 9. Torimarie 10. 
Tayvie 11. Muribolt 12. Lewis 13. Tisha 14. Poof
 15. RobbieRiot 16. Hare
7 votes, 83 points

Comments



Lewis25 minutes ago

Thanksss once again for ur comments <3

Tisha2 hours ago

oh wow...?

dailyicon4 hours ago

these was fun to read! I kinda did slightly get superman vibes from mine too haha

Tayvie4 hours ago

Ty and yeah idk anymore

Dimitra4 hours ago

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Leonardo4 hours ago

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